"Two sharp cracks splinter the air"

"The revving of a car and skidding of tires smother his voice"         

These two sentences occur in the first main paragraphs of the start of my book, they describe to gunshots and the escape of the gun wielding offenders in their getaway car. After these main paragraphs (that are written in italics for a more surreal feel to an opening) the writing returns to normal and the story is told through the eyes of a narrator rather then a description of events unfolding in the setting.

The main characters are introduced in the paragraphs after the italics font paragraphs. The narrator shares describing scenes and objects with the main character, Sade, throughout the rest of the book. Sade is introduced to the audience as scared and not knowing what is going on.

The first few pages would have something that involves action to keep people drawn in. There are always several things happening at once, whether they are in the open or behind the scenes remains up to the author. Sometimes a book will start off explaining the type of social situation the setting or the main character is in, such as a tough political climate, a peaceful climate and so on.

The opening page usually asks a lot of questions concerning events that have happen (usually exciting) so that the reader will stay and read till they find the answers to those questions. This helps create a connection between the reader and the story, and makes the reader imagine the rest of the story in their own head.

After the first few paragraphs describing what had happened to the main character's life event's leading up to the main part of the story begin, these events are a mad rush to get Sade and her brother out of the country as quickly as possible. What the author tries to do is draw the reader in to find out what happens to Sade in her new home.
The writer of my book decided it was better to explain what was happening at the present by explaining what had happened in the recent past to the main character. The main character's mother is shot and killed due to her husband’s efforts to get the truth about his government; this grabs my attention and tries to pull me into what happens next. 
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